The technical skills you showed here are very strong.
- kicking the ball
- walking through the house and the “fog of war” effect was very well made.
The story was very short, but that’s fine! It was fun to see the best friends playing football in real life and then playing on the computer.
Your English had a lot of mistakes in it, so I had to give it a low rating there. You should have checked with me before posting.
But still, great job!