Wow this is really good ahh!! I read through all of it (unless I missed a sidenote accidentally) and the wordflow in your work is just wonderful. I like that it's sometimes vague in that poetic abstract way, but still clear that the though-provoking didn't get me out of the experience of the game. The end almost had me tear up; it really put my own feelings of freedom with being enby/agender into beautiful words :)