Why do I want to cry rn? You did a very good job selling the emotion with the harmony and the melody. I do want to say that the track is quite repetitive tho. I would suggest a couple of things in order to improve it:
Modulate/Write new passages to keep the listener fresh. Nothing too fancy
Use the instrument dynamics (if your libraries allow it). The track felt monotonous because it was playing always at the same intensity, I personnaly like the "rollercoaster" approach, in which you start playing quietly, develop till a full climax, and then start lowering down the intensity again.
Try to vary the main instruments in every section; Another way to keep the listener fresh is to change a bit the instruments protagonism. For example, horns might be the focus at the beginning, and later you can write a string only section to change the texture and add new colours to the song.
You have a solid base, and the emotion you want to sell is very clear, you just have to tke care of those details ^^
Very good job tho, I can see that you actually put a lot of effort on it