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Huh, well at least I'll comment i guess XD.


And that would be nice! Should I make a separate document for other stories?

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Probably better to have them in one place, but it's totally up to you how you want to set it up.

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I'll keep it in the same document then.

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um, what was the name of the troll girl? I only say it once and I don't want to mess it up. Also almost finished with the story.

Ooldra. You can give her a softer-sounding nickname that she likes to be called, like Oolie or Olla.

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Hmmmm i weirdly like Oolie, but the way what do trolls look like in your setting? I was thinking a more stone troll, grey skin. Large tusks, little body hair, though if you go off of Norwegian trolls, she have a tail, be a fuzzy with hobbit feet, big nose and no tusks(though that is optional)


Of course there are a few other options, especially if you use a few "ogres" as reference like the metal hook footed tree dwelling, red skinned African ones.

The way the troll girl ends up is a little unclear at the moment. The idea of including her for the v5 release has received the go-ahead, but the design is not quite finalized. The male troll in the new boss battle quest has tusks, but I'll have to see what they look like on a girl's portrait before I make the decision to include them or not. I don't think she'll have a tail, but the rest of the design is somewhat of a work in progress at the moment, sorry about that. I'll get back to you on that when I get some additional feedback from my subscribers and maybe make some sketches.

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No worries! Hmmm if I have a subscribestar am I able to private message you on their? I don't want to spoil anything for other folks.

Yea, it does have a messaging function. I'm not sure if you need a paid membership or if a free one allows you to message too.