Hi there again Danielle! You seem to make a lot of games and that is great! However, for this game I was so confused what to do, I had zero clues what to do exactly.
I would suggest to make the story given little by little instead of those cards all being given at once at the start (maybe on each door you find a smaller note to talk about the story) I hope this idea will help and hope the video gameplay will be better of use too.