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I have never played the actual Yume Nikki before but the game you made was quite interesting as a whole with different realms for the player to experience the theme of "Happiness". There wasn't really much happening throughout the game so I can't really give much comments except that maybe fix the red room where the lamp works in the red room. I couldn't progress from there...
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