The last one. I've finally reached the end of the demo. It has many good points, the music, the characters personality, the plot, top voice acting, and the art. But I do have some point that I feel is kinda bad, though to be noted, I'm not a professional and my critique shouldn't be taken as important. I feel the pacing is too slow on transition to the next character or the next scene, and the dialog (I didn't know whether it's translated or not) was kind of 'funny' at time considering this was supposed to be a sad melancholic slice of life visual novel. Such as the comment on Jianyu's hair, "Like two horse ass rubbing on my face" (I don't exactly remember the dialog) or here in this video like "Zihua's diving like an ostrich"/"Like a camel back about to break". Other than that everything's good. Once again, it's not from a professional pov, so ignore it if it's not important.
