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Good morning/afternoon/evening/whenever!

First off, I just want to say I absolutely adore this game. Haven't played it all yet, but I can already tell this game is going to have a special place in my heart.

Anyways, I wanted to ask something a bit weird. I'm kind of a grammar nerd and I have a weirdly deep understanding of the complexities and nuances of the English language. I'm not a professional novelist or editor in any capacity, but I would love if I could offer my English skills to you. 

My plan is to go through the entire game and jot down anything I think could use some better language on a digitized document. I'll mostly keep to grammar, but if I find something I think I could improve tonal or diction-wise, I'll add it to the doc as well.

If you're interested in my proposal, then just comment as such and I'll make sure to send the document when it is completed. 

I hope this comment finds you well and that you have a lovely rest of your day.

Sincerely, 
aquamarineKangaro

PS. The song that plays in Eric's room... you wouldn't have that on hand, would you? It's very pleasing to the ears. 

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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy THE BEAST. I appreciate your help, but I'm currently have a proofreader working on the proofreading. However, feel free to DM me on Discord (Ghostiespectie (THE BEAST VN)#9637)