it’s a good VN so far. Im liking the idea of it and Iroko is adorable. So take your time on it. It’s none of my business how you write your VN, but maybe branch out with choices after you develop some more experience and can finish big workloads faster? Or even go back to make the changes at a later date? IDK about others, but I tend to read VNs over and over again while I have nothing else to do, so getting those variations at a later date as long as the main story continues is more important to me.