Got stuck in the first room for ages!  I'd tried the 'left' key a number of times without it doing anything; hadn't realised that it only works if you're looking 'forward'.

Once I got going I found this to be a engaging adventure.  Well done.

I love the way you have managed to create a narrative adventure in the short time you had, with locations, story development and interesting revelations.  This is a well realised game from the original idea.  It's a shame you didn't managed to get better sound in there.