Thank you for this demo! First of all, the quality of your project is great. The art, music and programming are very well done. I cannot say much of the story yet, because, I think, the demo was too short to make a full statement. So far it's good and it looks like there is much more to see. Also, in rare times the style of narrative was a bit confusing to me. I cannot really say why. Could be because of usage of some words or of the sudden change in the pace of the story. So consider it just me being picky.
I want to point out a "bug" that I've noticed. On the picture below the name of the speaking character is incorrect. I assume, it should be something like "???".
On a funny note, I'm embarrassed to admit that when I toggled the "Sympathy" menu in one of the scenes, I couldn't figure out how to put it down again. And only after I was going to report it to you as another bug and tried to repeat the issue, I noticed that there actually is a "close" button xD.
Thanks again. Best of luck to you! I would certainly want to see final release.