I want to commend you on the number of dialogue choices you have provided for the reader, it really feels like I am shaping the story! More than in any other vn I have seen to be honest. I have already played the demo several times and came across new dialogue each play through.
I can tell how much work you have put into each route already and I'm so looking forward to the full thing!
I came across a couple of errors, some of them have already been mentioned by another player.
One that I don't think has been brought up is this message
[code]
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/script2.rpy", line 5838, in script
if LaceyLove > 10:
File "game/script2.rpy", line 5838, in <module>
if LaceyLove > 10:
NameError: name 'LaceyLove' is not defined
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Full traceback:
when I am talking to Lacey in the cabin, a couple of sentences after I choose the first dialogue option.
And this:
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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While loading <'Image' u'images/Characters/vadeyn_sympathy.png'>:
File "game/script2.rpy", line 5614, in script
"I smiled a little at the thought."
IOError: Couldn't find file 'images/Characters/vadeyn_sympathy.png'.
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Full traceback:
when talking to Vadeyn in the cabin, a couple of sentences after I choose the "that's what I want most of all option"
It's not too much of an issue because it goes away when I click "ignore" but I thought I would let you know anyway