I disagree with the beginning of this story, because things never can be sufficiently glared. But last 4 pages are better thanks to the bubbling sound & i truly like the way you use and talk about water in your story: refreshing!
Trigger warning: (message to anyone reading this comment) this is kind of a short "soft" horror story with an odious protagonist. I don't want to spoil but please read it carefully.
This is a great story, thank you I loved how quickly it evolves