Found a typo. When Kali pulls you into her room and you see the vibrator on the bed you ask her, "Where you just having some fun?". It should be "Were"
I also noticed an instance where it says "arguement" when it should be "argument" as well as a line with two "you"s after one another. Sadly, I can't remember the specific scenes.
there's quite a few typos, but they're just that, typos. enjoy the story content, just read past the typos, all are easily understood, and none are syntax-breaking
