Looking at the judge's comment for my game, I guess I should have put more hints in my game >.<! (But then I don't think it will make much difference as that's the nature of the game ; one big puzzle). I think you are the only player who plays my game for more than five times lol.
I see that your game makes it to top 10, though it is a shame that it's not making it into top 3. You should put Beth into good "use", I am expecting harder puzzle now that I have two minds working together to escape that island :D.
I made 1-2 games before, but it's never as serious as this one. Right now, I don't really know if I should forget this project and move on, or if I should just continue and make this game even bigger.
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Hi!
Sorry that it's been so long since my last reply; I have been on a holiday trip abroad. Staying away from all kinds of technology.. haha. Back in business now.
I read that review you got from the judge(s). I personally would have given your game a higher score, but then again, a review is just a justified opinion. I liked your game very much audiovisually, and in my opinion, for example, your character portraits fit the game perfectly. The anime style gives the game the contrast it needs between the world and all the people in it. It makes it feel more alive.
About the amount of instruction in the game I partly agree with the judge(s). That is however, a difficult aspect in terms of game design because one of the main points in the game was to find out the path yourself. Like you said, one big puzzle. I bet some players need more instructions and some people only want the minimum. A save point or some kind of a skip option would be a good add like I have also said earlier, then it would save the player some time if they end up failing. Maybe a little less randomness as well; it also got me confused at one point. I also got stucked in the way that I couldn't figure out how to get enough xistence because all the other things I did consumed my stats even more. The best I could do was to have ~3 xistence when going to the elevator, I think. Any hints on getting more?
And yeah, I made it to the top 10 and it was a huge surprise to me, I'm very glad about that. It gives me motivation to go on developing :) I, however, got four different reviews and two of them were not so great experiences. I wonder why you only got one review?
I'm still thinking about whether I should continue developing The Sculptor or leave it as it is. Making the game longer would possibly require much additional design work as well.. And then it wouldn't be a "one-month-game" anymore. Have you, by the way, continued developing your game like you were thinking? If not, have you started any other projects? If you're on Twitter, give me a follow and I'll follow you back, I'd like to hear more about your future progress on gamedev. There seems to be lot of other gamejams here on itch as well, maybe we should participate in another some time!
Ah you were on a pretty long vacation, no wonder. Back to the nature ? (camping, hiking, etc?). I thought there will be no more reply once the jam is over, especially after this long, but turns out I was wrong!
About audiovisual: I am glad you liked it. I would have wanted the background sound to be at least better than what I ended up putting in my game..sadly I don't have many background sounds to choose from my library, and I was not willing to pay extra for the soundtrack (since it's just a jam lol).
About hints: are you still stuck on the first day? does your xistence point keep going down every time you hit the next segment of the day? If yes, then you should really drink the water from the tap water, or buy that H2O pill. Drinking water if not compulsory, later in the game, you might not want to drink it, so I don't think it's right for me to push people to drink the water everyday >.<.
About one review vs many reviews: it's kinda long to explain but you could check this https://forums.rpgmakerweb.com/index.php?posts/807646/ Short version: if your entry happens to be in the same -judge- pool with other "great entries", then your chance to jump into the next elimination phase is significantly diminished.
About The Sculptor future: if you want my opinion: if you enter top 3, for sure I will tell you to develop it even further. For top 10 - 20...well...I guess it's all about how much money and time are you willing to throw for this game, especially if you are aiming for commercial release....The potential is certainly there, I mean, even I want to escape from that island together with the girlfriend! :D
About InExits future: after some thinking, I guess I will put it off for now and work on another project. Right now I am making another game. I will be back to this game for sure, but I think I will change the story a lot by then haha. I will certainly tell you once I have the game ready.
About entering another game jam: I am not sure if there is another "low level entry jam/ RM entry jam" that's more "professional" than this game jam though...... do you have any jam in particular in mind?
Hehe, yes, I was actually travelling in Asia. Sun, heat, swimming, diving, new places, drinks, rest... and so on ;) Recharging my batteries.
Thanks for your hints! Speaking of water, I should've figured that out after your last hint. The times when I tried drinking water gave only negative effects to me, but this surely was good info.
And thanks for the review explanation, now I got it. I actually didn't read any forum posts during the jam. Guess I was too tired from my day work and my dev projects. Dunno whether there would've been any useful info.. Gotta be more active next time.
About the Sculptor, I still haven't decided what to do with the game, but certainly yours and others' positive words inspire me! If I decide not to continue the development of the game, a more longer sequel could also work nicely. A bigger game of the same concept was, after all, the original idea of mine. The thing is, though, if I'm going to make a bigger game of the idea, I want it to be possible to make a full working mobile and PC version out of it. I'm not sure if RPG Maker is the best engine for doing that, and I remember your comments about the difficulties of making a mobile version with RPG Maker as well. Maybe I should try and see if there are some good examples in Google Play.
It's nice to hear that you're currently working on another game project. Is it for some jam or is it a solo project? Are you making it with RPG Maker or are you trying some other engines or frameworks? If you want to show it sometime or if you need testers etc., please feel free to contact me :)
About jams, I've been following news about jams and such but not a single jam has yet grabbed my interest. I guess I will do my next project just by myself, although jams sure have some perks like deadlines and, of course, people and networks.