This game has a really intense and well-written story, but sometimes it becomes a bit too much with all of the reading that you have to do. The large paragraphs of text that often occur can be a bit overwhelming for some players and I would recommend breaking them up a bit more to make them more ingestible for the player. The music was wonderfully ambient and kept to the mood of the story very well. When it comes to engaging the player, I would consider more visual elements within the story, even if it's a simple background to change with the various settings or moods, and I would also consider more player choices throughout the story so that the player feels more immersed in this world you've created. Good job!