The story is very compelling and the art scattered throughout definitely adds to each of the scenes! I am definitely interested in finding out who the killer is and figuring out the mystery. Also, I love all of your music choices. They really enhance the time period and mood of your game's scenes. The couple critiques I have are that there are some spelling errors throughout (in some cases the words are spelled right but aren't the right word if that makes sense like a word that sounds like the intended word will be there instead) but that can be fixed with a simple once over. In addition, the red text is a little hard to see but I think all you would need to do to fix that is make it the same boldness as the text that surrounds it. I'd also agree with the comment that mentioned breaking up some of the passages so that they're easier to read. Overall great work!