so i finished the current version and wanted to give my thoughts.
of all the porn games i've played so far which is a fair amount this one definitely knocks it out of the park in terms of both story and comedy and is the best at those by far. because this is for the most part a linear story it was actually incredibly important that your keeping your readers engaged pretty consistently. and i found that like 90% of the time i was either horny, laughing or intrigued so i would say you did a pretty good job. there is definitely room to improve cause i feel like some of the plot starts to fall apart if i think about it too deeply but it isn't super apparent at first glace any way. and while the gags are amazing and i love them i also know i have laughed harder at jokes in a similar vein before. it's hard for me to point at anything in particular that you need to work on other than to take your already good writing and make it into amazing writing which i imagine doesn't help very much.
i can feel the passion you put into this and it shows so i hope you can keep that passion going and continue the make great work both on the rest of this and any future projects you make.
ps* just as a side note i'm curious if those 2 girls in the back of the lingerie store when you first enter are an easter egg to other porn games?
