Hey Hannah. I played through the build, didn't have any technical issues so, straight to feedback. I like the visual style, it has this feel of someone drawing out of memory to tell a story. So the main characters are very detailed but others elements are not because it's been a long time.
I think Jane's animation needs work since she's quite stiff. Also the white box where you click that can be done away with. More interactivity would be good, of course I understand the content is limited right now.. for future reference. :)
More importantly though is the control scheme. Maybe you can choose to focus on either having only mouse or only keyboard input. I think all mouse can work well, you click on points of interest, on where you walk, you click on dialog options. Just thinking out loud. :)
Keep working on your project, I'd like to see how the story progresses. :)
Ah thank you so much for your feedback!! I really appreciate it. I actually wasn't planning on having the mouse be the controls but I wasn't sure how to get rid of it, I'm such a noob! But it's very interesting to me that you think it could work well as point-and-click alone.
Thank you so much for playing my game and giving me your thoughts on it, I hope you have an awesome day!!
(P.S. ....this entire game may or may not be a memory... you're on the right track.)