Just finished playing build 0.1 and thought I'd leave a comment!
Even if there's not much content right now I feel this VN starts off quite strongly. I like the MC already - which is always a good sign - and the cast of characters we are introduced to so far (Trevor, Noah, Miss B) seem to be well grounded and have their own ''mood'' as well. Which, props to you! Especially Trevor (ngl, this bunny is quite a selling point for me heheh)
There's also some hints at something more sinister at play, which is a nice bonus. I'm quite curious what's gonna happen in the next days at the Lodge!
Although, and perhaps it's just me: the sprites seem to be a little ''too big'' (or rather their resolution) for the screen? I know this VN is still early in dev, and it's not a substantial issue, but thought you could get some feedback on this!
Good luck creating this story Packrat, I'm already on board to follow it! <3