This story has such a fun and unusual setting! The art is really crisp and clean, the only thing I didn't like was the walking animation. You've accomplished a heck of a lot of in a month!
The game could do with proofreading, there's some basic typos, quite a few grammar errors, and some places where the text gets cut off. The tent cutscenes are a really nice idea. If it's anything like MV, there should be a fadein/out screen command that you can use to try and hide the part where Tom flashes in and out.
Noticed a few minor bugs/possible errors-
You can walk through the fence here outside of the burger place;
If Tom's equipped the dual blades and then returns them to Zoey, he still has them equipped.
You can't sell the corrupted jade ring.
After defeating the mob boss, you're not transported out and have to walk back through the ghost town.
I played for a little over an hour and got up to the plank puzzles in the sewer. I started to get really annoyed by the high random encounter rate, most of the time I could easily escape but it seemed harder in the sewers. I find battles really boring and one hour is the judge cut off point so it felt satisfying enough to end there.
Did try to take on the twins 3 times and failed each one XD Probably needed to grind a bit more...