I’ll admit I haven’t played the game myself, but I have watched 3 different judges stream it so I believe I have a decent sense of the game.
I appreciate the difficulty in creating puzzles that are challenging but not too hard to figure out, and while this game does have those it seems like it has too many of them given the 30-minute time limit.
The character swapping mechanic is interesting and the strong writing does make wading through the text worthwhile.
I hope the experiences from this jam help you continue to grow and improve as a game developer.