Having played through the game twice, after murdering an innocent the first time. I can say, I enjoyed this game and I think a lot of that is down to the premise itself, which is good.
At first, I thought I was going to be overwhelmed with all the names, but thankfully the lighting helped a lot, which did make things a lot easier.
I quite liked Savior at times, they were amusing in a very dark-comedy sort of way.
The only problem I really had with it was the music, being a bit repetitive but it didn't really hamper my ability to enjoy this game at all.
All in all, you should be proud of your first game and good luck in the contest.