And I thought Echo was depressing... :)
But seriously, this is a good start. I found some of the prologue a bit tedious, but the lava lamp was good.
P.S. Backing you on Patreon.
Just my opinions, so take them under advisement and maybe they're just me whining too :)
1. Mary Shelley needs to stop hemming and meandering and get to the point of her visit.
2. The reason "I" am in the hospital seems to vary from one bit of dialogue to the next. And while I have cried myself to a sore throat with events similar to this story, it just feels off to me.