i feel like the game has alot of potential but it is pretty rough in it's current state (i played 1.06 for context) quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes along with the shower scene getting repeated from pierre's apartment and then once again back at the station. and it may be a personal thing but i feel the community service charge is beyond egregious (it's like charging a kidnapping victim for illegally crossing a border while tied up in someones trunk)
Thanks for playing the game! Apologies for the grammar and spellings, I'm not a native speaker so I'm prone to make mistakes.^^'. I have planned to look over the older scenes and fix them after I've released the first days for every ROs. I'll have another look at the bug related to Pierre's. Thanks for the heads up.
As for the community service charge part, I do understand your point of view (It's prone to change, I might consider lowering it down or extend the deadline for it later down in the future), I do have a reason behind it.
Think about it. Would you really believe anyone in real life who claims to be from another world? You're probably more likely to doubt it and call them a lunatic, right? And even perhaps, think of that as them trying to excuse their way out of a situation. The characters in the VN weren't there when it happened, so logically, they're not just going to take someone's word blindly, especially if the claim is that big. If the MC was the citizen of that world, got kidnapped and crossed the border, then things will unfold differently. I'd imagine the police/investigator force will be able to track the MC's identity down because he was born in that world then act accordingly with the information available. (Help the MC return back or something.)
So, Suspicions are expected, then again, it's a fiction world, anything can happen, eh? ;)
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There is a feedback form where you are able to report these errors/mistakes if you're inclined to do so.
https://forms.gle/oGntzgWGdZTkydwk7
Thanks!
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i appreciate the response and for a non-native speaker you do a very good job, as for the bit about the community service i can see your point but atleast from how i understood the situation pierre knowing the protags father came from a different world convinces the others that the "from another world" story is true atleast that was my understanding of how things played out
Hmm, well I'd imagine the problem is the general public finding out that Dan is being given preferential treatment, honestly. While there very likely is proof of world hopping taking place, it's also likely information that's pretty secret.
At least that's what I'm assuming would be the case granted some of these mysterious individuals could track you arriving at their world, yet people don't know it's a thing.
it would not be hard to establish a cover story doubly so if he has Pierre and the company backing him so his"preferential treatment" would be a non issue since no one would even know. i do see what you are trying to say though i just feel like a little lie would cover it all up since only a small handful of people seem to know
That Dan was charged with community service I can absolutely understand. But if I've heard correctly, about it being 720 hours split over 4 months, then it seems perhaps a bit extreme. If those are the numbers then Dan would on average have to work 6 hours every day to make the deadline.
Seems like it would be somewhat difficult for a regular person to not only having to do that but also work an actual paying job as well.
Do I understand everything correctly?
I think lowering the time would be a good change- mathematically it doesn't work out. Excluding weekends, there are 85 days in 4 months (the time period given.) That means that the main character would be working around 8.5hrs of community service per day, a 42.5hr work week, on top of having to maintain another job to make a living wage, mind you in a world where he has no references, no work history, and no degree. I don't think its a hard fix- I just had trouble wrapping my head around the number because of this. (Otherwise really enjoying the game! Keep up the good work!)