This is such a cool and artful game. I got a lot out of the story (even though I've never played the game this is based on) and the way the visuals combined with the music made it extremely effective my two favorite scenes were the church and the story book, as I felt like I could see myself in both. my only small criticisms I think boil down to quirks of the engine this was made in. I felt like the sounds and the styles of the rpgmaker menu system clashed a bit with the rest of the game, and it would have felt more cohesive if those were original assets as well. Overall, I think you should be very proud of the story you've presented here; fantastic job!