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The characters are perfectly likeable and they do have interesting and distinguishable personas. The spites are nice and simple, yet attractive. The setting of a fantasy-sort-of realm is always my favorite. The story is intriguing - but unfortunately is awfully hard to get into because of the mediocre grammar.  I REALLY want to like this game, but it's just such a drag to 'overlook' bad grammar. I did try this game before but I had to stop out of frustration. Now with the new version, I was hoping it all would be fixed, but unfortunely I can't tell much of a difference from the foregoing. :(

If you need help with grammar, I wouldn't mind helping you out. Or perhaps this issue is simply that the mac version hasn't been updated to the new version?

From what I know mac version has been updated as well.  I can hardly tell if any additional fixing is still required. Since I'm pretty bad at English grammar I've gladly accepted Haruka Nami's offer to help me fix those issues - and I'm grateful for that because it was a lot of work done for free (you may not know this but my game is really LONG). If someone wants to spend dozens of hours of unpaid work just to help me improve my game I'm never going to say "no, thanks".  :)