Just played through the demo! I love your art and this is a very promising concept! I liked the interactions Lavinia has with her mother. I just have a few nitpicks. The thing with the cookies and the neighbor happened very suddenly, and it took me a while to realize that time had passed because the background didn't change. Also, the word "invention" is misspelled in the Lavinia-Mother conversation. And at the end, it says she begins to work at home without the hardware store background changing. Really looking forward to more of this!