I liked the “mcguffin is their heart” reminded me of the idea about the person tattooing the nuclear launch codes to their heart has a knife they carry around so in case the president wants to launch a nuclear weapon they have to take the knife from the person and carve out their hear and read the codes off of it.
but I did read a few things wrong. I don’t think it’s the fault of fiona or the format. but like I read “roll twice and combine” as “roll twice and create” and “Reforge your mother… Uncover the alien…” as “Unforge you mother… Recover the alien…” and “create wings that work” as “create wings in a wok” and describing the whole corporate pop music mind control idea as “elaborate” felt like a strong word to use for a strategy thats essentially “yell sex sounds so as ppl come back”.