Magical Girl Concept (4 /5)
- you don't really see stuff like this nowaday's in english outside of Japan and without the "adult tags"
and even then they're mostly CG. Here it feels like a proper game and not some event driven Visual Novel
Engagement/Fun. (4/5)
As above the game actually has meaningful content other than just going from one event to the next like those pumped out VN Games. actually has RPG elements
Originality/Creativity (3/5)
Unfortuntely i couldn't give it full marks simply because their other RPG maker games out there with the same theme. even if there more CG and Visual Novel
Graphics, Audio, and Polish (3/5)
You used "what you had availible" enough said. Not everyone can create their tilesets. you were honest and said "some of them were purchased." there use in the game and the maps were pretty good however. Would've been 4/5 but theres a few games out there using the same assets.
Theme Interpretation (4/5)
Summary.
- You don't really see stuff like this outside of Japan.
- Has meaningful content and actual has RPG elements unlike equivilant games. abet the rng could be better. you could also include areas that a player could "level" in so they don't hit the "Oh **** Wall when they party gets wiped out.
- the Graphics you did actually do was pretty Good.
if it was given a bit time and development it could be a great Game.
if your gonna keep developing this, i would love to play it though