Nice game! Great art and interesting characters.
I'm very much curious about the story and what happened to Mollie. Also really want to know what happens to the eagle since he's kind of a jerk. lol
Though the game has a lot of strengths including excellent art and an intriguing story, the translation was a little off. I'm no expert in English either, but it felt like the texts were keeping me from really getting into the story. I suggest you mend them for further improvement.
And if you're looking for bugs, Sebastian responds in Korean in his room after I give him a wrong answer.
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I'm excited to see another team who love mystery and puzzle.
Keep up the good work! I'll be rooting for you! :D