First of all i am a really big fan of your game anything that involves fury's and a way to escape ones own skin and reality is a big triple plus in my book , games like this always get me sucked in and i always begin to wish i was a character in this story and i just cant stop reading, always wondering what will happen next . any ways i have some suggestions if that's ok, to expand your visual novel even further I really hope that there is another chapter to go into this because I really hope that the love and romance that the PC made will continue, maybe even future conflict like trying to figure out that secret dinner party found in the woods and things like that.
also it might be a little far fetched but i think it might be a cool idea to put in a little bit of magic to which ends in the PC getting stuck in Scylez's computer game and Scylez on the outside helping the PC with a little programing.
another thought it might be pretty cool if you put up some thought into character creation and a little bit of a back story like species , size , build (male , female or hem) and sexual preference , and maybe a way to find a job in the city maybe even working at (white eagle effects) with Dracky after the festival
and i don't want to sound too perverted but I hope that there will be some more sexual scenes too and i am also hoping that some of those scenes will lead back to the junkyard and to that dingo letting the PC into the group that the dingo created and an opportunity to also let the PC get railed by all the Xenomorph's big and small , maybe having one pick you out as there favorite and maybe even turning it into a side job , also learning there language so that the PC can talk to them in there native language , maybe even turning it into a mission to help them out any way they can , even getting more people into the circle and get the awareness out , and even try helping out in finding the one that left the sunken ship.
each one of those side story's could be an adventure onto itself and maybe even the friends of the PC as well
i hope i am not over stepping my bounds by suggesting new material i just really love this game that you created and hope that you use some of theses suggestions and that the adventure continues.
your fan Loyalmutt