thanks for the comprehensive review!! i really appreciate all of the kind words. :) so so kind that even the critiques don't feel so bad. sorry to disappoint wrt your preface, though.
there will probably be another update with more dream sequences and drawings, revisions to some of the things that were added last minute, and i'll definitely take your thoughts into account.
it would be really cool to add music!! but there's not really a built in way to do that in twine so far. my thoughts were to do something with debussy's suite bergamasque (where the clair de lune movement comes from), maybe make electronic arrangements/variations and then host it online somewhere as a playlist so the twine could link to it and it can play in the background. but i definitely did not have time to set that up during the jam, so we'll just have to wait and see if i'm motivated to do any of that now that it's wrapped up. thanks again!