I don't have any feedback on actual mechanics or anything, but for the lcp, I recommend adding the "no image data" art used by the Everest and such to all the mechs here that don't have their own art yet. Also, the PI-OF mechs are all listed in alphabetical order, except for the Anise, which is listed at the bottom
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Oh good idea, adding that would make it much better visually! And yeah, the Anise being where it is is semi-intentional – it was the last PI-OF mech I made, and is meant to deliver a slightly different message, if that makes sense? It's the end of the story you get across the other licenses, and I think putting it at the front (although it would make sense) gives it a different impact.