Not bad. I like the art theme and think you put in some effort putting this together. Needs some adjustments. It may be a personal thing but having to wait for the text is exhausting and if I quickly press space I miss your content. Would like to give it another go but would want to wait till i can go through the text faster. Think there might be bug; at the angel, if you just sit there you can get the dialog of many different characters after the angel has told you his part.