Hi there I played your game.
I have listed some of my thoughts. I hope you find it useful.
Pros
- The logo intro is cool. Too loud sound effects though
- Very nice visuals. The 3d modelling is very well made. Thumbs up
- Great voice acting is always a plus
- Overall the audio was great too. I miss some ambience sound effects though.
Cons
- Insanely low movement speed. You should increase that by a lot.
- Not much gameplay other than reading and walking around. You should definitely consider adding more stuff for the player to do. Likewise I find it odd, there's a door half open, but the player is totally unable to enter.
- Missing crosshair. I recommend you put add a crosshair/text which highlights important objects (Raycast). I missed the vent. I had to watch it from another’s playthrough.
- A glitch where the player gets stuck in the debris downstairs near the stairs.
I didn't finish it because I didn’t know, I could interact with the vent, even though I tried.
However, I like the concept. The game definitely has potential, and I would love to give it another try at some point. Keep it up!
Cheers