Geoff, I failed you, I flunked out at the orientation, I hope you can forgive me. I really liked the atmosphere and the general idea, the details are fun and the puzzle was pretty good (not too hard, not too easy). For me, the time I had for orientation was just a smidge too short and I am too impatient to do stuff like that over and over again until I succeed - what can I say, I am a quitter.
But for a first game, this was so good and I hope you keep on doing what you’re doing because there are things in there that I really liked. There is room for polish, of course, but this was already everything but boring which is the most important part of any game.