A very sweet story with heartfelt writing and gorgeous art and music. I can really relate to the doubts and loneliness of both main characters, and I feel happier for having played it. Great job.
I only have two little critiques. One of the piano tracks (the one when Serena first enters the library) is a little overpowering; I found it a bit distracting in the scenes where it plays. I also think the script could benefit from one more editing pass to iron out some minor mistakes here and there.
These are small issues, though. Overall, I enjoyed this story a lot. Again, great job.