Thats not what I meant. Im not sure how candid I can be so I'll just say it like this. The line at the start about making breakfast for her "dear best friend" comes across as forced. Im wondering if "best friend" isnt supposed to be a different word that starts with "B"
I mean, as the dev, you're the only one that would really be able to answer my question haha. Again, I just don't know how candid I can be about the question
