Cool entry! The movement super good, but unfortunately there were some negatives:
The game looks... bad. sry. It looks like you've taken one of brakey's games graphics, put them into the game, made sure that the scale of 1 pixel stays inconsistent and called it a day.
Plus the camera is soo zoomed in that you barely see what you're doing, so the arrows were defenetly a good addition.
The collisionshapes are sometimes so big, that even when I think I shouldn't have gotten hit, I still died.
But the main idea is awsome, and you wrote a good story! Keep up and don't stop learning!