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Looks like a cute start! I feel like you have something very potentially interesting with how "capturing" spawners works, even without any kind of "spawning" mechanic yet -- it seems like trying to figure out efficient "loops" to maximize how many you have captured at once before any revert back to "uncaptured" could be an interesting puzzle. Maybe hitting a certain score threshold permanently unlocks new paths, allowing for better and better loops over time?

Do you have any plans to make "sneezing" a game mechanic, or is that more of a "reward" for capturing enough spawners?

The one thing I really longed for was some kind of map or mini-map, to help me plan out routes. 

Adorable art style, too! The how-to-play screen is really cute.

Good luck with your plans!!

It's interesting that the spawners came across like that! :O They actually do spawn things- the yellow circles are separate things they're spawning above them, and they destroy themselves and add to your score when you touch them. I should probably have made them smaller? But I don't know if it would have come across right either way, since now that I'm looking at it, it does look like lights going on and off. If they were moving, or if they dropped a bit onto a surface instead of popping into existence, it could come across better, but... maybe I'll just fully swap it to a 'capture the flags' sort of mechanic instead of a 'pick things up' one. This level would play pretty much exactly the same, the final sprites could be way more interesting, it could be optimized (since the game would pretty much only have to deal with half as many objects), it could make for more interesting challenges (tricky platforming, 'stand here for a while', etc), and each spawner could run on its own timer like I originally imagined, instead of relying on the janky global timer I resorted to when I couldn't figure out how to make individual instances command themselves independently right T_T

Expanding paths as you get more points is a good idea. I'd thought of opening passageways lead to a 'higher risk higher reward' type area, with more difficult jumps and trickier enemies. Unlocking passageways in the same space would work too, though, and put more focus on speed and efficiency. Both would do well as a more permanent sort of progression, since I can't think of a way to kick you out of the area or close the gates when you don't have 'enough' points without it either being awkward or potentially trapping the player. (If you only had one level to focus on, keeping your points up would be easy, but once there's multiple levels, your points for every character other than the one you're focusing on will decay slowly, so I'll have to keep that in mind as well...)

As for that button, it was half 'you get a reward for keeping your points at least above 10' and half 'I have to include it at some point because a) i drew the sprites and want to use them and b) it's the whole point of the game, but I really don't want to jump through the hoops to make only some dialogue change her sprite when she's clicked' tbth ^^' Plus, the button just made sense once it was there- given both the context of the dialogue it causes and the way I coded it, I could easily make it spam-clickable without feeling out of place or breaking shit, and also it keeps that side of the screen from looking too blank. I doubt it could serve much of a gameplay purpose, at this point at least.

A map is a good idea! I'd originally gone for, like, those 'you are tiny and navigating a big world' vibes, but the zoom level I went for with the camera in the end (none) doesn't lend itself to that very much, since you can see just enough to be frustrated. It wouldn't be very difficult to add, either, since I could just take a screenshot of the map and then have it pop up- that's definitely on the updates shortlist :D 

Thank you so much for your feedback!! You gave me so many good ideas :')

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Spawners: Oh! Yes, I see that now, it's spawning the yellow circle. I was reading the "color change" as "capturing" the spawner, especially since my score was going down... that made me think my score was just the total number of spawners I had "captured." I should have realized I wasn't actually "holding" 20 separate spawners at once, though!

I guess I was thinking of a virus, taking over a cell to make more virus instead of more cells... so I was expecting that the "spawners" were the ones making the antibodies, and that capturing them might (in some later version of the game) allow you to have it make more of you instead. Thinking about it more, maybe "capturing spawners" could determine how quickly some kind of "viral load" bar progresses? So when one "flips back," it's not a total reset. Just an idea!

Expanding pathways: My idea there was that any new pathway opened would be permanently opened, even if your score decreased afterwards! Maybe it opens the second you hit the threshold, or maybe you have to arrive at the barrier with the correct score to break it down. The better you play, the more quickly you can hit the next threshold and move onto a more efficient loop. (But that's my bias for games where routing/refining is involved.)

Map: Since you mentioned the "you feel small in a large space" feeling, I think that's a good point and a good feeling to try to capture! And yeah, just having a nice map/mini-map of the area may detract from it. What about a  button that lets you zoom way far out? That could help showcase how small you are, maybe? A persistent mini-map might end up trivializing the exploration / learning aspect of the game... whereas being able to get a glimpse of the larger surrounding area might help a player who's willing to spend the time zooming out get a sense of how everything fits together?

I'm glad you found my comments useful!! I hope you find mechanics that you're really happy with!!