I give this one a 2/5. I can see the effort that went into this, but that doesn't mean it's good. Way too few choices, way too much dialogue. I had the thing on skip past chapter 4. It had potential, but the absolute helplessness of the MC was absolutely dragging. I like RP'ing and putting myself in the shoes of the MC, and I felt absolutely dragged down and insulted by my characters helplessness and incompetence.
This comment is what happens when you criticize a work on the basis of a personal standard instead of understanding narrative objectives and functions of the different elements in the story. Turns out that the quantity of dialogue is variable, the number of choices has never needed to be extensive, and the "helplessness" of the character is in fact an important topic in the story, based on a context, of course.
Your tastes are not what makes a work "good".
Naturally, it's not perfect. Also, it can be boring for you, nothing bad with that, but it hardly defines anything. A different approach with pertinent observations could make a good review, but as it is, yours is rather useless.
Indeed, this section is just for put comment and personal opinions but at such your commentary could be more construtive so other people could not only maybe going with the debate but also that garantized a posibility of be hear and made some adjustment to future games if that critique is shared by a good ammount of people. Just take this as a friendly approach to your way of comment since being on the annonymity doesn't allow you disrespect others' work or comments. Have a nice day ^^