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Play: You need a second person to properly enjoy this game, and my current girlfriend is semi-long-distance- more importantly, I wasn't going to hit her up just to rate this- so I just clicked through all the prompts myself. I guess this could be fun if you're a boring straight couple? Or drunk?

Aesthetic: Mostly comprised of text and stock photos. There are a lot of grammar mistakes, but judging by your other works, I think your first language might be Spanish, so I can't get too cross with you for that.

Sound: None.

Narrative: None, but that's just because it's not a feature of the game. This is more like the digital equivalent of a very basic card game than anything else (which is actually kind of interesting because the cards drawn can automatically adjust for playtime, like you say on the game page, in a very natural way without having the players order the cards or use separate decks). Scores low but not for a bad reason.

Horny: It tries. It gives you 'horny' prompts. But... eh. It's just a laundry list of 'flirty' actions. I doubt anything could arise from trying this out, I think it's more likely that the players will end up having a good laugh.

Kink: I went into this expecting vanilla, but... continuing on the ice cream metaphor, this is white cake. There's not 'default flavor', there's literally nothing.

Stealth: Not stealthy, but doesn't try to be. Scores low but not for a bad reason.

Harmony: I guess it just depends on whether or not the couple is into this? But just pure gameplay wise... click read click read click wait for a few seconds click read.  

Novelty: It's not.

Final Thoughts: I like how you specified it's mobile compatible- it's often unclear when it comes to 'play in browser' games that aren't made with Twine, so it's nice that you went the extra step and then made sure it was clear. Don't like how it's a 'him and her' game. Same-sex couples exist, my guy... Your other games look a lot more polished than this, and you submitted this pretty early- imo, you probably should have taken a lot more time to formulate and refine an idea.

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Thank you for your vast and deep analysis and for the time you took on playing it.

I notice you are a great observer, i have not enough time to make something more polished and playable because school started earlier, also you noticed english is not my first language.

I really appreciate how you describe each ranking point in deep and i will consider all your comments for my projects.

I wish you good luck and i will check your game asap.

Thank you again!!!