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Hi i would like to give you feedback in the hope to making your V.N. better not just for me but everyone that read's it, one off i am loving the story line  and the graphics are almost spot on the only issue i have is white on white,i understand that changing text for a few pages would be a pain in the butt but a simple colour change could helpand would be less of a problem to read in some case almost disapear when i have it full screen on my BEN Q 24" LCD,  like in the screen cap i tuck i will explain in the bedroom scene the guy crash's out on the bed with snow white sheets and the TEXTED of the story is white with a black shadow see image below if it possable to change the sheets in a update to say egg shell white, off white or cream it would make life so much easier for ever to read i hope you under stand where is going with this and it makes you V.N. so much better for all.

Thanks Mr GaTeZ 

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This is from the first episode. I did it back on 2020. I'm trying to avoid to make these kind of  ilumination mistakes now. But thanks for the feedback. I'll try to enhance this scene on photoshop for the next episode :D

that is fine i understand writing, drawing and editing a great book takes time BUT time well spent and the way i see it if i played a tiny part in making that much better i feel a honored reader i cant wait to see your handy work