Viability: I can play to the end but there are a few errors with the text entries!
Presentation: The pictures add to me being able to set myself up in this world. Very neat!
Theme: It seems to be an exploration based escape "room" with a fantasy twist. I think it's nice and light hearted.
Engagement: The images immediately brought up my engagement factor. I think cleaning up the text will help it feel much more engaging!