Technically this is really impressive!! I like the color scheme you have with the peach and green, and the font choice fits that. There are a few moments where I feel like it's hard to connect to whats happening in the story, theres no lead up to explain why we should care about her lost wings, or why she lost them, or if it's common to have them. There are a lot of questions this leaves, like is she in pain? I think it would be nice to have some more on that. This is nitpicky, but capitalizing words for emphasis in the middle of the sentence disrupts the flow a little bit.