I played this through a couple times (I died the first time). I really like the creepy vibes you have with the audio and the story is really compelling. The only suggestions I have is to maybe maybe have the heavy breathing go on for longer in the passage where the player dies? It would be more scary and stressful to read the final paragraph while it was playing still. Also maybe add a gif of some part of the creature there as well like you have of the ranger banging on the window.