This is a good start! I like how you are playing with the player's use of emotional/social intelligence for certain sections to affect the outcome and it could be an interesting direction to go. Going through this, I'm highly interested in the culture of this "winged" world and how you are going to reveal the story through the player character's story. It's also interesting how you're playing with the font and page color as well. Can't wait to see where you go with this, keep up the good work!