This was for sure a strange one but I enjoyed playing it! ran in to a few bugs which I kept in the video but nothing to crazy for a prototype. Yes it was short and the only thing I can think of would be to add more to the story from the description of the 4 people. The voice acting gave this great immersion and it played pretty smooth, so I have no complaints really. I feel like you could add more to the suspense/thriller, as in it feels a little empty so pack some stuff in haha. Overall i think youre on the right path, great job! side note I honestly dont know if i missed anything.