I liked this little game! There wasn't much to it, but considering the length and the scope I thought you did a really good job crafting this experience. I'm not really sure what happened with the story, but it didn't really seem like you wanted it to be very specific so I'd count that as a success as well. Hope you keep making games, lemme I'll follow your stuff! Cheers.
(And check out Lumps Plays! Lumps Plays are Let's play with Pop-up commentary, it's the new way to Let's Play that all the cool kids are raging about :D)